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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 03 조회 12851

Become a Thought Leader

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Hi Simon,

Today, I'd like to talk about'Thought Leadership.'

In my point of view, Everyone has a personal brand these days. But if you want to move ahead, you need to be more than the "finance guy who understands the business." Distinguish yourself as someone with truly unique perspective respected inside and outside the organization. Here are three ways to do that:
- Build your online presence. The Internet is a perfect place to start showcasing your knowledge.
Post Comments on blogs, write your own posts, and connect with other bloggers to create a network.
- Win some awards. Identify awards that matter in your industry and don't be afraid to nominate yourself, or convince colleagues to do it for you.

What do you think about my oppinion?

Thanks in advance for your effort.

JAY
튜터 교정 답변

Hi Simon, Today, I'd like to talk about'Thought Leadership.' In my point of view, Everyone has a personal brand these days. But if you want to move ahead, you need to be more than the "finance guy who understands the business." Distinguish yourself as someone with truly unique perspective respected inside and outside the organization. Here are three ways to do that: - Build your online presence. The Internet is a perfect place to start showcasing your knowledge. Post Comments on blogs, write your own posts, and connect with other bloggers to create a network. - Win some awards. Identify awards that matter in your industry and don't be afraid to nominate yourself, or convince colleagues to do it for you. What do you think about my oppinion? Thanks in advance for your effort. JAY

 

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Corrections

What do you think about my oppinion?

—► What do you think about my opinion?

don't be afraid to nominate yourself, or convince colleagues to do it for you.

—►don't be afraid to nominate yourself or convince colleagues to do it for you.

 

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Hi Jay,

As what Ronald Regan said, one of the most prominent president of USA, “Leadership is the art of changing a group from what it is into what it ought to be." I strongly believe that to be a leader in the workplace requires the ability to effectively control and direct situations. Managing a company isn't all about numbers and profits; it's also about managing personalities.

Teacher Simon

 

 

 

 

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