Unit2. Movie
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
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It is my script for this class.
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I love action or SF movie like Avengers, Hulk and Mission impossible series.
Do you know Mission impossible?
It is my favorite movie.
It is a story of a man who clears impossible missions.
In fact, I like Tom Cruise who is main character of this movie more than movie story.
He is strong, clever and never loses like powerful hero.
I really want to be like him.
The movie delivers an instructive message about bad guys always die.
It is my script for this class.
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I love action or SF movie like Avengers, Hulk and Mission impossible series.
Do you know Mission impossible?
It is my favorite movie.
It is a story of a man who clears impossible missions.
In fact, I like Tom Cruise who is main character of this movie more than movie story.
He is strong, clever and never loses like powerful hero.
I really want to be like him.
The movie delivers an instructive message about bad guys always die.
튜터 교정 답변
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