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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 03 조회 14950

My favorite food

작성자: 71850 담당 튜터: Brooke
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I like to eat Korean foods much better than western foods.
Specially, my favorite food is Sam Gyup Sal which is pork belly or bacon.
Korean usually grill sam gyup sal using charcoal fire.
While grilling the meat, its smell and shape is very tasty for me.

I think I eat sam gyup sal once a week.
Even though this food may have me get some weight, I can't lose the chance to eat it.
Thanks
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I like to eat Korean foods much better than western foods. Specially, my favorite food is Sam Gyup Sal which is pork belly or bacon. Korean usually grill sam gyup sal using charcoal fire. While grilling the meat, its smell and shape is very tasty for me. I think I eat sam gyup sal once a week. Even though this food may have me get some weight, I can't lose the chance to eat it. Thanks.

 

Wow! I also like it Adrew. It is expensive  in here though. You did a good job in writing. Continue doing your best. Have a great evening!~

-Brooke- :)

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