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공개 첨삭 완료 2018. 07. 26 조회 13186

25th,July,2018

작성자: darakwon_ololol555 담당 튜터: Ethel
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I went the beach I have worked from at that time when a half of July started. I expected there were few people I have to manage.But, There were 70 people(almost 20 family or they might be coulples). That's reason the people I am supposed to manage are workers in Samsung. So, They are working weekday. It is on vacation period eventhough. Workers in Korea usually get an vacation onlt one or two days(if it is included, theirs will be 3-4days.)
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I went to the beach I have a  work at that time when the half of July started. I expected there were few people I have to manage. But, there were 70 people(almost 20 families including couples). That's reason the people I am supposed to manage are workers in Samsung. So, they are working on weekdays. It was  vacation period eventhough. Workers in Korea usually have their vacation only one or two days (if it is included, they will be having 4 to 4 days.)

Hi,

Thank you for writing. I really appreciate your effort. Keep on writing to enhance more your English skill.

Teacher Ethel ^^

 

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