25th,July,2018
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went the beach I have worked from at that time when a half of July started. I expected there were few people I have to manage.But, There were 70 people(almost 20 family or they might be coulples). That's reason the people I am supposed to manage are workers in Samsung. So, They are working weekday. It is on vacation period eventhough. Workers in Korea usually get an vacation onlt one or two days(if it is included, theirs will be 3-4days.)
튜터 교정 답변
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