Question
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
1. He does not make any technical formulation. He just inputs formulation I have made into the ERP system.
If i conect two sentences, He does not make any technical formulation and just inputs formulation I have made into the ERP system. Is it correct ?
2. He did not receive pay raise in correspondent with a rise in prices until telling me that he was going to quit his job. He did not receive pay raise in correspondent with rising prices until telling me that he was going to quit his job.
If i conect two sentences, He does not make any technical formulation and just inputs formulation I have made into the ERP system. Is it correct ?
2. He did not receive pay raise in correspondent with a rise in prices until telling me that he was going to quit his job. He did not receive pay raise in correspondent with rising prices until telling me that he was going to quit his job.
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