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공개 첨삭 완료 2018. 08. 07 조회 12750

weather

작성자: ksj5225 담당 튜터: Trixie
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It is always above 35 degree these days. It is very hot. I use air conditioner all day.
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It is always above 35 degree these days. It is very hot. I use air conditioner all day.

 

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These days the temperature is usually above 35 degrees celcuis . It is very hot. I use air conditioner all day. .

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