My Mentor
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
In fact, I have no specific mentor in my business area. I am an ordinary biz-man, so it is difficult to find special famous men in this area. Nevertheless, I am respect following people.
First, I am honor of Seung-yup Lee, who is a Korean baseball super-star. His nickname is Home-run King and he has so many records relating to the hitter. He is famous for sincerity and his motto is that the true effort doesn't betray. I was impressed to the motto, and it became my motto, too.
Second is Mr. Myung-bak Lee, who was the last Korean President. He is a univ. alumnus with me. Before 30 years, he was a normal biz-men, too. However, he showed his ability in his jobs and became the CEO of the large company. Finally, he became the president after the course of the Congress member and the Mayer.
I want to effort like SY Lee and to success like MB Lee in the future.
First, I am honor of Seung-yup Lee, who is a Korean baseball super-star. His nickname is Home-run King and he has so many records relating to the hitter. He is famous for sincerity and his motto is that the true effort doesn't betray. I was impressed to the motto, and it became my motto, too.
Second is Mr. Myung-bak Lee, who was the last Korean President. He is a univ. alumnus with me. Before 30 years, he was a normal biz-men, too. However, he showed his ability in his jobs and became the CEO of the large company. Finally, he became the president after the course of the Congress member and the Mayer.
I want to effort like SY Lee and to success like MB Lee in the future.
튜터 교정 답변
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