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공개 첨삭 완료 2019. 01. 24 조회 12293

in the activity class

작성자: ksj5225 담당 튜터: Henry1
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She likes jumpping with mom, doing foward roll and running uphill and downhill on the mat in the activity class.
튜터 교정 답변

She likes jumping on me, doing foward roll and running uphill and downhill on the mat in the activity class.

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Hello Crystal,

I think your daughter is so energetic and very adorable. Anyway, please be careful in using prepositions. Check your spelling as well. Thank you!

- Henry (^_^)v

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