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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 09 조회 13301

Trust in Your Decision-Making Skills

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Sometimes you should meet a some kinds of situations which to make a decision. Yes, knowledge is power, but too much knowledge can take away your power. When solving problems, many leader gather an abundance of information and conduct in-depth analyses to give them what they hope are the right answers. This can lead to analysis paralysis or to data-driven, but illogical, answers. Often the best answers are educated guesses informed by your past experiences coupled with new information and insight. Don't put too much faith in information analysis alone, and don't disregard your decision-making skills. Remember to always check answers with your gut feelings before acting.

Thanks to your effort in advance.

Jay
튜터 교정 답변

Sometimes you should meet a some kinds of situations which to make a decision. Yes, knowledge is power, but too much knowledge can take away your power. When solving problems, many leader gather an abundance of information and conduct in-depth analyses to give them what they hope are the right answers. This can lead to analysis paralysis or to data-driven, but illogical, answers. Often the best answers are educated guesses informed by your past experiences coupled with new information and insight. Don't put too much faith in information analysis alone, and don't disregard your decision-making skills. Remember to always check answers with your gut feelings before acting. Thanks to your effort in advance. Jay

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Corrections

Sometimes you should meet a some kinds of situations which to make a decision

—► Sometimes you should be in a different kinds of situation wherein you experience to make a decision. 

 When solving problems, many leader gather an abundance of information and conduct in-depth analyses to give them what they hope are the right answers.

—►  When solving problems, many leaders gather an abundance of information and conduct in-depth analyses to give them what they hope are the right answers.

 Don't put too much faith in information analysis alone, and don't disregard your decision-making skills.

—► Don't put too much faith in information analysis alone and don't disregard your decision-making skills.

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Hi Jay!

I strongly believe that the best in teacher in life is experience. The only way to truly understand something is to experience it for yourself. Life teaches more effectively than books or school. When it comes to decision-making, I don't just rely on information from books. I also try to look and reminisce on my past experiences to form and create a right a decision.

Teacher Simon

 

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