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Tell me about watching movies.

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I like to watch movies. But I don't care about the genre. The most important thing when I watch movies is the story. Interesting or boring. Even I have a strong point. Or, it is my weak point. That is my forgetting. After I watched the boring movie, I just forget it. That's why it is difficult for me to tell you that I dislike movie genre. I'd better telling you the movie l watched lately. I watched 2 movies. One is korean, the other is X-man. The korean movie is about killer. The hero is Jang Dong Gun who is a famous actor in korea. Especially he is very handsome. Unfortunately the movie is so bloody. So if you have a weak stomach, I don't recommend that movie. X-man, as you know, it is typical hero movie. I think the story is so transparent. It means finally the good guys victory. But it is so interesting. Anyway, I will go to movie on this weekend with my family. I expect this weekend!
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Hello Jake! Here are the corrections for what you wrote. Thank you for writing a story. I know that you would be a good English speaker in the future. Have a great day!

 

I like to watch movies and I don't care about the genre. The most important thing when I watch movies is the story. Interesting or boring. Even if I have a strong point or if it is my weak point. I can forget that. After I watched a boring movie, I just forget it. That's why it is difficult for me to tell you the genre of movie that I dislike. I'd better tell you the movie l watched lately. I watched 2 movies. One is a Korean movie, the other is X-men. The Korean movie is about a killer. The hero is Jang Dong Gun who is a famous actor in Korea. He is very handsome. Unfortunately, the movie is so bloody. So if you have a weak stomach, I don't recommend that movie. X-men, as you know, it is a typical hero movie. I think the story is so transparent. It means finally the good guys won. But it was so interesting. Anyway, I will watch a movie this weekend with my family. I can't wait for weekend to come!

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