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공개 첨삭 완료 2014. 06. 10 조회 14020

Concerts

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I like performance better than music concerts. There is the place which gathers many theaters in Seoul. The name of place is "Dae Hak-ro". Every day, we can watch a variety of performances in there. They do many genres of performance. You can choose the genre you want. Thiller, Comedy, Romance and so on. I love to watch the performance in the very front. When I seat in front, I can feel actor's passion and emotion. Also, I'm able to concentrate on performance better than back seats. The "Dae Hak-ro" is famous even to foriegners. If you haven't knew there, I recommend you go there. But, as I know, there is no english performances. I know that might be understood perfectly by you unless you can speak korean. However, I'm sure you can understand overall story. Because I could understand "Momma mia" story when I watched it in England. Just believe your feeling. Anyway, I want watch a performance now talking about the performances to you. I gonna go to watch a performance on this weekend.
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Hello Jake! Thank you for continuously writing. Just keep on doing this to improve your English skills. Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

I like watching theater acts better than music concerts. There is a place in Seoul which shows many theater acts. The name of place is "Dae Hak-ro". Every day, we can watch a variety of theater acts there. They do many genres of performances. You can choose the genre you want. Thiller, Comedy, Romance and so on. I love to sit in the front seat when watching their performances. When I sit in front, I can feel the actor's passion and emotion. Also, I'm able to concentrate on their performance better than when I'm on the back seat. The "Dae Hak-ro" is famous even to foriegners. If you haven't been there, I recommend you to go there. But, as I know, they are not performing using the English language. I know that it might not be understood perfectly by you, unless you can speak Korean. However, I'm sure you can understand the story because I could understand the story "Momma mia" when I watched it in England. Just believe in your feeling. Anyway, I want to watch a performance now because we just talked about it. I'm gonna go watch a performance this weekend.

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