200103 reveiw
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Hello. My name is Yoon Taek Han. I work for a company called POSCO. POSCO is a steel company located in Korea. I've been in the company for seven years. I'm in charge of the plate sales. The plate is a type of iron(steel) used as a material for ships, heavy equipment or construction. From this year, I will also sell exports. The countries I came to be in charge of are Japan and the Middle East. In order to do well in export sales, I started studying English conversation. My goal is to communicate smoothly when I go on a business trip. So I want you to teach me a lot. I will study hard.
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