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The url of the news that korean elementry school girl killed her friend

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https://n.news.naver.com/article/025/0002963748
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https://n.news.naver.com/article/025/0002963748

 

Thank you!  Iwill tak a look at it and then we can discuss it. It really sounds like a great topic!

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Hindy Blusstone

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