neighborhood
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Because I am so busy, I usually leave my apartment early in the morning and come back so late at night.
Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often.
But I was temporary resting now from office for upbringing of infants from feburary 2013 for 15 months.
During that time, I met many neighbors around my apartment.
They have one or two babies like me.
One of them has two children and their ages are same to my two daughters.
So they play with eachother. Ofcourse I like her very much.
our second doughter were born 20th and 21 th on feburary 2013.
because of that reason I became close with her family.
We talked about many things about education, trip, money and so on.
She often introduces me some other people.
Unfortunately I have to comeback to my company last month.
So I rarely meet her, but last night I met and talked with her in beer restaurant.
I had realy happy time.
Therefore, I don't see my neighbors often.
But I was temporary resting now from office for upbringing of infants from feburary 2013 for 15 months.
During that time, I met many neighbors around my apartment.
They have one or two babies like me.
One of them has two children and their ages are same to my two daughters.
So they play with eachother. Ofcourse I like her very much.
our second doughter were born 20th and 21 th on feburary 2013.
because of that reason I became close with her family.
We talked about many things about education, trip, money and so on.
She often introduces me some other people.
Unfortunately I have to comeback to my company last month.
So I rarely meet her, but last night I met and talked with her in beer restaurant.
I had realy happy time.
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