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Cooking

작성자: 1102047346 담당 튜터: Chloe1
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Actually I’ve never sent special invitations to people since I graduated elementary school. I remember sending my friends special invitations to celebrate my birthday when I was in elementary school. It was a special day to me. So I did it. Many friends came to my birthday party with preparing gifts for me. We enjoyed the time together eating party food. Nowadays, I don’t send invitations anymore. Just call or send text messages. Of course, you can invite people through SNS like blog, Facebook, twitter and so on. Also, you can invite people as making a chat room on Kakaotalk that is a famous SNS in korea. In my case, I use only kakaotalk when I want to hang out with friends. Because I don’t use other SNS. Unfortunately I’m not good at cooking so I must order some food for my guests. If my mom makes some food for us, we take it. Although I can’t make delicious food, I can eat very happily food anyone made for me.
튜터 교정 답변

Hello Jake! Happy friday! Here are your corrections. ^_^

 

Actually I’ve never sent special invitations to people since I graduated elementary school. I remember sending my friends special invitations to celebrate my birthday when I was in elementary school. It was a special day for me. So I did it. A lot of my friends came to my birthday party and they had gifts for me. We enjoyed the party. Nowadays, I don’t send invitations anymore. Just call or send text messages. Of course, you can invite people through SNS like blog, facebook, twitter and so on. Also, you can invite people in a chat room on Kakaotalk, which is a famous SNS in Korea. In my case, I use only kakaotalk when I want to hang out with my friends. Because I don’t use other SNS. Unfortunately, I’m not good at cooking so I must order some food for my guests. If my mom cooks some food for us, we eat it. Although I can’t cook delicious food, I can eat any food that anyone will serve me happily.

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