I go to the hometown

I am going to my hometown this holiday.
I am going to visit Seonyudo on the way.
The island has a pretty sandy beach, so it would be good for my children to have fun.
And you can also fine there the famous Iseongdang Bakery.

I was able to discover the beauty of Seonyudo through the Internet.
If I go to Seonyudo, I want to walk on the sandy beach with my children and I want to try some restaurants if I have a chance.

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