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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 05. 06 조회 10755

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작성자: civicedu_oosik50 담당 튜터: Henry1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Korean coronavirus patients have decreased significantly these days
Recently, the number of infected patients has decreased to less than 10 people, and most of the patients are foreigners.
People don't seem to be seriously concerned about coronavirus either.

Today I have to go home early and take care of the children because my wife has a dining together
By the way, I wish my wife had less alcohol today.

the children seemed happy because they were with their parents for a long time
but it is true that the mind and body are tired because it is first weekend after election day
튜터 교정 답변

Korean coronavirus patients have decreased significantly these days.
Recently, the number of infected patients has decreased to less than 10 people, and most of the patients are foreigners.
People don't seem to be seriously concerned about coronavirus either.

Today, I have to go home early and take care of the children because my wife has a dining together.
By the way, I wish my wife had less alcohol today.

The children seemed happy because they were with their parents for a long time.
But it is true that the mind and body are tired because it is the first weekend after election day.

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