Playing sports
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I liked to play baseball with my friends when I was in elementary school. I liked to play baseball as a pitcher. Because Chan-Ho Park was so famous as major league pitcher, he was my role model. I respected him. I wanted to throw ball like his fastball. We played it by using tennis ball not real baseball because of safety. We were not good at baseball. Therefore, we usually threw the ball to each other as mistakes. But fortunately we didn’t get hurt because it was just a soft tennis ball. Also, I loved to play baseball as a hitter. I was so excited when I hit single or home run. Actually the baseball rule is more advantageous to pitcher than hitter. That’s why hitters usually get out. But I think the last victory is hitter not pitcher. Hitters can get scores unlike pitchers. Pitchers just block the hitters. Although they blocked the hitters very well, they can’t get score. Therefore, I liked to play baseball as a pitcher or a hitter. I miss that time.
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