Self introduction 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Regarding my job, I have been working for a department store over 15years. It was my first job, fortunately. Now, I have a position of a team manager in food&living division in H.Q.
I really love to go camping with my son whenever we can reserve a camping site, so that, my son can make great memories when he is in childhood. When we go camping, my wife has enough rest in our home.
I think this is all I can say about my self. Many thanks for listening.
I really love to go camping with my son whenever we can reserve a camping site, so that, my son can make great memories when he is in childhood. When we go camping, my wife has enough rest in our home.
I think this is all I can say about my self. Many thanks for listening.
튜터 교정 답변
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