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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 07. 08 조회 10804

Movie-My own answer

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Daya1
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My favoite mive is Harry Porter series. Daniel and Emma starred in the series. You know, it's a fantasy movie that comes from a novel. It is a long story that a boy overcomes a bad wizard with his friends as he grows up. I love this movie because I can enjoy watching with my very young son. Fortunately, He is also a fan of this movie and has a magic wand toy. In addtion to those, I believe it is helpful for his English communication skills.
So, I store all the series on streaming TV services and watch them with my son whenever we want.
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My favorite movie s Harry Porter series. Daniel and Emma starred in the series. You know, it's a fantasy movie that comes from a novel. It is a long story that a boy overcomes a bad wizard with his friends as he grows up. I love this movie because I can enjoy watching with my very young son. Fortunately,he is also a fan of this movie and has a magic wand toy. In addtion to those, I believe it is helpful for his English communication skills.
So, I store all the series on streaming TV services and watch them with my son whenever we want.

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