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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 07. 10 조회 9982

the mail to request cooperation

작성자: civicedu_myraphael 담당 튜터: Vanessa2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
We are interested in democratic civic educations in your organization and inquiring if -- has any interest to participate in this project as an expert to share the information and experience with us.
---topics--
If -- can share knowledge and experiences and introduce your performance about any of these topics, please let us know. The brief information on topics you like to bring out would be more appreciated. Then, we might be able to discuss further details. (Schedule, Payment, Quantity and format of Report, etc).

Thank you Vanessa,FYI this mail should be formal.
튜터 교정 답변

We are interested in democratic civic educations in your organization and inquiring if -- has any interest to participate in this project as an expert to share the information and experience with us.
---topics--
If -- can share knowledge and experiences and introduce your performance about any of these topics, please let us know. The brief information on topics you like to bring out would be more appreciated. Then, we might be able to discuss further details. (Schedule, Payment, Quantity and format of Report, etc).

Thank you Vanessa,FYI this mail should be formal.

 

 

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