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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 07. 15 조회 10011

Shopping

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Daya1
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I really enjoy shopping grocery items with my son on behalf of my wife. Instead, my wife can take a rest when we go shopping.
The reason why I grocery shopping is that I can choos the food that I want to eat and my son can choose the food that he wants. And also, I believe that I am more professional about food and food price than my wife because I do food-related work.
My favorit store to shop grocery is a discount store because price is reasonable and parking is convenient. I go there once a week. Whenever I go to there, I pick a sesonal seafood, fruits, and wine.
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I really enjoy shopping for grocery items with my son on behalf of my wife,so my wife can take a rest when we go shopping.
The reason why I grocery shopping is that I can choose the food that I want to eat and my son can choose the food that he wants. And also, I believe that I am more professional about food and food price than my wife because I do food-related work.
My favorit store to shop grocery is a discount store because price is reasonable and parking is convenient. I go there once a week. Whenever I go to there, I pick a sesonal seafood, fruits, and wine.

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