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수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Thank you for your e-mail.
We very much appreciate that you have responded positively to our suggestion and it is a pleasure to implementation of the project with you.
It is very impressive what KMOP has done so far. There seems to be a lot of content that we really want to know. Development of contents, training modules for trainers, organization of train the trainer's sessions, especially gamified virtual collaboration platform would be definitely an attractive subject to the Korean peoples. Please share your expertise with us.
Hi, Vanessa ~ Do all the sentences are formal?
We very much appreciate that you have responded positively to our suggestion and it is a pleasure to implementation of the project with you.
It is very impressive what KMOP has done so far. There seems to be a lot of content that we really want to know. Development of contents, training modules for trainers, organization of train the trainer's sessions, especially gamified virtual collaboration platform would be definitely an attractive subject to the Korean peoples. Please share your expertise with us.
Hi, Vanessa ~ Do all the sentences are formal?
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!