Memorable event in my neighborhood.
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Last year, there was North Korea's Food sharing day near my neighborhood. The theme was how North Korean dishes like such as traditional type of mashed potato pizza, sauted tofu and herb mixed rice. From early morning, the tutors and volunteers prepared ingredients, bowls, dishes and chopsticks. There were defactants and they explained how the foods are prepared and north korean live during cold winter. The weather was somewhat chilly though, the festivity was flared up and spread through the event.
Over 60 years, South and North Korea have been separated and widened unique political and economical status. We hope consistently share the culture and contribute to unification of Korea in the near future
Over 60 years, South and North Korea have been separated and widened unique political and economical status. We hope consistently share the culture and contribute to unification of Korea in the near future
튜터 교정 답변
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