MY family~
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
They are four people in my family.
I was married on the two thousand and four years.
I am currently living with my wife and 10 years old son and adorable
8 years old daughter. My wife is a housewife.
she is five cm taller than i and eight years younger than i.
so everyone is green with envy
My son is now 3rd grade at 명덕 elementary school.
He always carry good smiles, although he has a bit of shy part.
My daughter has just entered the elementary school, the 명덕.
She is so pure when she talks and smiles at me.
I was married on the two thousand and four years.
I am currently living with my wife and 10 years old son and adorable
8 years old daughter. My wife is a housewife.
she is five cm taller than i and eight years younger than i.
so everyone is green with envy
My son is now 3rd grade at 명덕 elementary school.
He always carry good smiles, although he has a bit of shy part.
My daughter has just entered the elementary school, the 명덕.
She is so pure when she talks and smiles at me.
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