my house~
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I live in Seoul 고덕동.
I moved to here last December and previously I lived in 암사동.
I moved to this place because there are good schools with high reputations.
My house was built in 1996 so is a bit old.
The problem with the house built in 1990s is that they did not consider much about insulation.
Meaning, it gets really cold in winter.
However, we have good environment as it has a big supermarket, schools and parks near by.
I moved to here last December and previously I lived in 암사동.
I moved to this place because there are good schools with high reputations.
My house was built in 1996 so is a bit old.
The problem with the house built in 1990s is that they did not consider much about insulation.
Meaning, it gets really cold in winter.
However, we have good environment as it has a big supermarket, schools and parks near by.
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