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공개 진행중 2020. 08. 19 조회 9823

PET

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee2
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I have a puppy named Kura. Kura means lier in Korean because when I was first introduced to him, I heard he was very young black Poodle. However, we knew that he is about 5 years old, not young Shih Tzu when our familly met him. That's why his name is lier. Nevertheless, he is very active, charming, and clever. He has very cute black eyes with white and brown fur. Now, all our familly strongly belive he is a part of our familly.
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