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I work for Shinsegae department store which is one of the biggest retail companies in Korea.
My company was established in the 1960s and its predecessor was the first department store in Korea, which was established around 1910. Our company is the parent company of Shinsegae Group specialized in distribution business. As a market leader in the distribution industry in Korea, our company has diversified its business related to the distribution industry. Recently, our company has invested a lot in the online business as well as offline. I expect our company to maintain it's M/S.
My company was established in the 1960s and its predecessor was the first department store in Korea, which was established around 1910. Our company is the parent company of Shinsegae Group specialized in distribution business. As a market leader in the distribution industry in Korea, our company has diversified its business related to the distribution industry. Recently, our company has invested a lot in the online business as well as offline. I expect our company to maintain it's M/S.
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