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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 09. 08 조회 9541

Colleague

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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One of my bosses used to text or mobile messensger to me for work after wokr or on weekend. However, I didn't want to be disturbed during my private break. Unfortunately, I couldn't solve this problem because he was my boss. Now I am in the position of the boss in the company, as a team manager. So, one of the things I think I'm good at is that I rarely contact my teammembers after work or on weekends except for emergencies. I don't want my team members to be stressed because of my contact at their private time.
튜터 교정 답변

I think this is awesome and very considerate of you! 

 

One of my bosses used to text or mobile messensger to contact me for work after work hours or on the weekend. However, I didn't want to be disturbed during my private personal time. Unfortunately, I couldn't resolve this problem because he was my boss. Now I am in the position of the boss in the company, as a team manager. So, one of the things I think I'm good at is that I rarely contact my teammembers after work or on weekends except for emergencies. I don't want my team members to be stressed because of me contacting them during their private time.

 

 

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