Instrument
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I can play the guitar a little. When I was in high school, I joined a guitar club. The reason why I joined the club was so simple. It looked very cool to me. I saw my senior who plays a guitar. It was so impressed to me. I decided to sign guitar club up with my best friend. I learned how to play a guitar from my club senior. He taught me how to play from the basics. It was a good experience to learn guitar in my school. Sometimes we did guitar performance on the stage. It made me so nervous to play the guitar in front of many audiences. Even I did mistake on performing. But I just remember that accident with smile. Actually I didn’t practice the guitar hard. I liked to hang out with my club friends. That’s why I’m not good at playing the guitar now. But I participated in club hard! I continued to do as club member until I graduated high school. Now, I just play guitar once in a while and I miss that time so much. If I went back to my high school, I would practice harder than before.
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