E-mail part3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The advice "not only to focus on the elections" was a great conclusion. Thanks for the good advice.
Nevertheless, and we are a national election organization, and this year is the first year young students became new voters, so please understand that we will prioritize election-related materials this time publications. (We are planning to expand to more various youth democracy education next year!)
Nevertheless, and we are a national election organization, and this year is the first year young students became new voters, so please understand that we will prioritize election-related materials this time publications. (We are planning to expand to more various youth democracy education next year!)
튜터 교정 답변
교정 내용이 클립보드에 복사되었습니다!