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E-mail part4

작성자: civicedu_myraphael 담당 튜터: Vanessa2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
That is the reason why programs like 'Smart Wien' is a little more attractive than 'Bubble Filter' to us. (Please refer to the attached file, it is just an example and the format is subject to change freely.)
If you can give us only help as possible as you can, we will be able to add more that we need again by ourselves with ZPB's permission.



Please let us know if you have any questions.

Thank you again for your cooperation.
I look forward to listening to you.
튜터 교정 답변

That is the reason why programs like 'Smart Wien' is a little more attractive than 'Bubble Filter' to us. (Please refer to the attached file, it is just an example and the format is subject to change freely.)
If you can give us only help as possible as you can, we will be able to add more that we need again by ourselves with ZPB's permission.
-subject to change...- no need to say freely

-if you can provide as much help as possible, we will be able to add more than what we need again together with ZPB's persmission...

no need to say by ourselves


Please let us know if you have any questions.

Thank you again for your cooperation.
I look forward to listening to you.

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