Project
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
The most memorable project I've worked on is premium grocery store project.
I worked for a reading retail company as a food buyer and we started to differenciate us from our cometitors.
The reason why this project is very special is this store was a first real premium grcery store in Korea. It was simply so similar to Whole foods market in the U.S. The store had many kinds of organic food and exotic imported grocery and also, the mood of store such as interior, lighting and signages are very special and luxurious.The project was a big success, and our cometitors started some similar project.
I worked for a reading retail company as a food buyer and we started to differenciate us from our cometitors.
The reason why this project is very special is this store was a first real premium grcery store in Korea. It was simply so similar to Whole foods market in the U.S. The store had many kinds of organic food and exotic imported grocery and also, the mood of store such as interior, lighting and signages are very special and luxurious.The project was a big success, and our cometitors started some similar project.
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