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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 06 조회 9404

Exercise

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
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학생 제출 원문
Even though I am not quite athletic, but I like working out.
Almost every morning, I go to the gym in my apartment complex before work. Sometimes, It is not easy to wake up, but I strongly bilive it is best way to maintain my health. I usually start with stretching and then, lift weights to maintain my body shape. I finish with unning on the treadmill to burn off fat. After exercising for an hour, I take a shower and go to work. It is a my routine.
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Even though I am not very athletic, I like working out.
Almost every morning, I go to the gym in my apartment complex before work. Sometimes, it is not easy to wake up, but I strongly believe it is best way to maintain my health. I usually start with stretching and then I lift weights to maintain my body shape. I finish with running on the treadmill to burn off fat. After exercising for an hour, I take a shower and go to work. It is a my routine.

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