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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 06 조회 9901

Traveling in the country

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
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Recently, the reason that my familly and I only travel domsticlaay is due to Pendemic.
last summer, I was staying at a hotel in Pusan city with my wife and young son for 3days for vacation.
Pusan is the 2nd biggest city anb the city is a coast city in the southern province in Korea.
The hotel is in front of a wonderful and sandy beach. And also, the hotel has great dining restaurants and facilties such as a gym, a swiming pool and a souna.
The best memory was fantastic ocean scene through a big window in the hotel room So that we can get enough photoes.
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Recently, the reason that my familly and I only travel domstically is due to the Pandemic.
Last summer, I was stayed at a hotel in Pusan city with my wife and young son 3 days for vacation.
Pusan is the 2nd biggest city and is also a coastal city in the southern province in Korea.
The hotel was in front of a wonderful sandy beach. And the hotel also had great dining restaurants and other facilties such as a gym, a swiming pool and a sauna.
The best memory I have from the vacation is of the fantastic ocean scene through a big window in the hotel room. So we took lots of photos.

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