Traveling Abroad
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When I travel abroad, I make sure to bring my passport and a copy of passport, a multi adaptor for travel and some cup-ramens.
First, I need my passport to get on a plane and enter a foreing coundtry. And also, I prepare for a copy in case of emergency such as when I lost mine. Second, a multi adaptor is must have item when I use electronics in other country because the electricity in each country is different. Finally, I bring enough cup-ramens. It is very helpful when I miss Korean food on a trip abroad.Furthermore, they are very convenient to carry and cook.Without them, I can't feel com
First, I need my passport to get on a plane and enter a foreing coundtry. And also, I prepare for a copy in case of emergency such as when I lost mine. Second, a multi adaptor is must have item when I use electronics in other country because the electricity in each country is different. Finally, I bring enough cup-ramens. It is very helpful when I miss Korean food on a trip abroad.Furthermore, they are very convenient to carry and cook.Without them, I can't feel com
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