House
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학생 제출 원문
My apartment is a 16-story building in a apartement complex, and I live on the 10th floor. I moved to this house 2years ago because it’s very closer to my son's elementary scool. Actually, he can see the playground in his school through the window of living room. There are three rooms in my house. The biggest bedroom is for my wife and me, and one room is for my son and the other one is for my family's clothing. My favorit place is a sports facilitiy in the apartement complex. They have a gym, a screen golf room, and an indoor swiming pool. There is totally perfect.
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