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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 13 조회 10450

Bank

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
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Banks in Korea open for business at 9:00 in the morning and close at 4:00 in the afternoon.
The bank I often go to is very closed to my office and usually crowded with people all day long. Sometimes, I have to wait for a long time. The atmosphere of the bank is very normal but people in the bank is very kind and nice. However, I usually use ATM because I don't want to spend a lot of time in order to wait for my turn in the bank.
튜터 교정 답변

Banks in Korea open for business at 9:00 in the morning and close at 4:00 in the afternoon.
The bank I often go to is very close to my office and usually crowded with people all day long. Sometimes I have to wait for a long time. The atmosphere of the bank is very normal, but people in the bank are very kind and nice. However, I usually use the ATM because I don't want to spend a lot of time in order to wait for my turn in the bank.

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