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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 14 조회 10417

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작성자: civicedu_myraphael 담당 튜터: Vanessa2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Dear Marc ,

I guess you missed some point of our request from our previous mail while your busy schedule.
I am copying the main points of the request.

1) Please fill out the new no.1 question "Introduction of ZPB" to the attached file. There are already answers to ZPB's activities and roles, but I guess it would be good to start with a brief introduction before entering the article.

2) Furthermore, I would be very grateful if you could attach a brief description, including photos or illustrations of the program introduced in articles.
튜터 교정 답변

Dear Marc ,

I guess you missed some point of our request from our previous mail while your busy schedule.
I am copying the main points of the request.


- during your busy schedule or while you were on a busy schedule.


1) Please fill out the new no.1 question "Introduction of ZPB" to the attached file. There are already answers to ZPB's activities and roles, but I guess it would be good to start with a brief introduction before entering the article.

2) Furthermore, I would be very grateful if you could attach a brief description, including photos or illustrations of the program introduced in articles.

-introduced in the articles

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