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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 19 조회 10494

Holidays

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
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One of two biggest holidays is Luna new year's day.

On this day, all of my relatives gather together and we do some traditional activities.

Firstly, we do big bow to our father and mother. It is a first bowing in new year and they give some words of blessing as an answer.

And then, we eat rice cake and dimsum soup for breakfast, It is very common traditional food for Lunar new years day.

Except for it, we enjoy various traditional foods and those are in charge of woman. I always appreciate.
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One of the two biggest holidays of the year is the lunar new year's day.

On this day, all of my relatives gather together and we do some traditional activities.

First, we do big bow to our father and mother. It is the first bowing of the new year and they give a blessing as an answer.

And then, we eat rice cake and dimsum soup for breakfast. It is a very common traditional food for the Lunar new years day.

We enjoy various traditional foods and the woman is usually in charge of those. I always appreciate them.

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