Holidays
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
One of two biggest holidays is Luna new year's day.
On this day, all of my relatives gather together and we do some traditional activities.
Firstly, we do big bow to our father and mother. It is a first bowing in new year and they give some words of blessing as an answer.
And then, we eat rice cake and dimsum soup for breakfast, It is very common traditional food for Lunar new years day.
Except for it, we enjoy various traditional foods and those are in charge of woman. I always appreciate.
On this day, all of my relatives gather together and we do some traditional activities.
Firstly, we do big bow to our father and mother. It is a first bowing in new year and they give some words of blessing as an answer.
And then, we eat rice cake and dimsum soup for breakfast, It is very common traditional food for Lunar new years day.
Except for it, we enjoy various traditional foods and those are in charge of woman. I always appreciate.
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