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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 20 조회 10061

2020-10-20

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
May I call a dog or a child 'it' when I don't know its gender

Once I attend the committee meeting, the members of the committee will feel being watched
Once I attend the committee meeting, they will feel that they are being watched

While running, I had some slight and minor electrical shocks in my right leg, especially in my right calf.
While running, I had some slight and minor twinges in my right leg, especially in my right calf.
튜터 교정 답변

May I call a dog or a child 'it' when I don't know its gender

Once I attend the committee meeting, the members of the committee will feel being watched
Once I attend the committee meeting, they will feel that they are being watched

While running, I had some slight and minor electrical shocks in my right leg, especially in my right calf.
While running, I had some slight and minor twinges in my right leg, especially in my right calf.    ** Downloaded

 

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