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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 22 조회 10244

Hospital

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I don't like to go to the dental clinic. It is because it is so painful and very expensive. However, I could not put off visit to the dentist due to the problem of my gum. I had my theeth sclaled and then treated my gum.
I felt that the pain was not serious but sad. It is because the dentist said 'It is time you paid more attention to your gums than to your cravities'. You know it means I am old enough. Since then, I have purchased gum-only toothpaste, toothbrush and mouthwash, and have been using them hard.
튜터 교정 답변

I don't like to go to the dental clinic. I dont like it because it is so painful and very expensive. However, I could not put off my visit to the dentist due to the problem of my gums. I had my teeth cleaned and then they treated my gums.
I felt like the pain was not that serious but sad. It was because the dentist said 'It is time you paid more attention to your gums than to your cravities'. You know, it means I am old enough to do better. Since then, I have purchased gum-only toothpaste, toothbrush and mouthwash, and have been using them hard.

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