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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 23 조회 10132

City life 1

작성자: ssg1_024323 담당 튜터: Marilee1
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I live in Seoul where is the biggest city in Korea. Here is my hometown and I have lived here as my age, over 40ty's.
People say that there are too many people and cars. However, Seoul is surrounded by a lot of big and small mountain. So, I can enjoy enough nature whenever I want to go a mountain.
People also say that Seoul citizens are so busy. Yes, I totally agree with it.
However, they still are kind and warmful. One thing I don't like is crazy price of house.
In addition that, we have only a few of option regarding house such apartment complex.
튜터 교정 답변

I live in Seoul it is the biggest city in Korea. This is my hometown and I have lived here as long in years as I am old,  over 40 years.
People say that there are too many people and cars. However, Seoul is surrounded by a lot of big and small mountains. So, I can enjoy some nature whenever I want to go a mountain.
People also say that Seoul citizens are so busy. Yes, I totally agree with it.
However, they still are kind and warm. One thing I don't like is the crazy price of our houses.
In addition to that, we have only a few options regarding houses such apartment complexs.

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