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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 10. 26 조회 10732

2020-10-26

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
Without warning/Without a warning, they shot people

We travelled to/travelled Jeju

I finish work at 5 PM. However, I will leave the office at 3 PM tomorrow
Application title: Application for Early Leave / Request for Early Leave / Early Leave Request

I spent all my time watching/in watching/on watching the wood carvings

There are other/another things to enjoy too
튜터 교정 답변

Without warning/Without a warning, they shot people

We travelled to/travelled Jeju

I finish work at 5 PM. However, I will leave the office at 3 PM tomorrow
Application title: Application for Early Leave / Request for Early Leave / Early Leave Request

I spent all my time watching/in watching/on watching the wood carvings

There are other/another things to enjoy too     **Downloaded

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