Concerts
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I really love to go concert of my favorite singer. My favorite singer is psy. Do you know kangnam style? He is an awesome singer in the world. He held concert once every years in Olympic stadium. i always go his concert with my friend in the end of year. His concert is so excited and interesting. Psy concert is so popular. I have to book a ticket in advance. Before I enter the concert, I have to wear casually to rock out at his concert. So I bought some water, too. After the show, my friend and I talk about the concert and we take a photo in front of the concert hall in memory.
튜터 교정 답변
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