CITY LIFE 2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
People in the city try to escape from the city life and want to enjoy nature on the weekends.
I said Seoul is surrounded by a lot of mountains. So, people go hiking a mountain.
These days, it is the seaon of autumn colors, I really love this seson. So, whenever I have a time, I go hiking a mountain near my place. The mountain is very closed to my house, It takes just 20minuites by walking.
Except mountains, people go Han river and parks in the city. In other words, people want to escape from the city life on the weekends.
I said Seoul is surrounded by a lot of mountains. So, people go hiking a mountain.
These days, it is the seaon of autumn colors, I really love this seson. So, whenever I have a time, I go hiking a mountain near my place. The mountain is very closed to my house, It takes just 20minuites by walking.
Except mountains, people go Han river and parks in the city. In other words, people want to escape from the city life on the weekends.
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