CITY LIFE 3
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
I went to a supermarket with my wife last Saturday.
Many young people say online shopping is more convenient and chipper than an offline market.
As for me, I absolutetly prefer going a supermarket for grocery. It is because I can check freshness of food and also try to eat some sample. In addition to those, I can get some discount such as time sale.
Even though it is a little bit inconvenient, I totally like go shopping in a super market for grocery.
Many young people say online shopping is more convenient and chipper than an offline market.
As for me, I absolutetly prefer going a supermarket for grocery. It is because I can check freshness of food and also try to eat some sample. In addition to those, I can get some discount such as time sale.
Even though it is a little bit inconvenient, I totally like go shopping in a super market for grocery.
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