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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 02 조회 10019

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작성자: civicedu_myraphael 담당 튜터: Vanessa2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
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We are very much appreciated for your wonderful contribution.It would be a great part of our publications.   Most of the images you attach to the file will be included in the publication. However, is it okay to replace the Go-givers image with some sheets of 'Democracy-part 1' from Go givers's free lesson pack? As an Election Commission, it would be more appropriate to show election-related resources.
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We are very much appreciated for your wonderful contribution.It would be a great part of our publications.   Most of the images you attach to the file will be included in the publication. However, is it okay to replace the Go-givers image with some sheets of 'Democracy-part 1' from Go givers's free lesson pack? As an Election Commission, it would be more appropriate to show election-related resources.

 

We greatly appreciate your wonderful contribution.

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