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공개 첨삭 완료 2020. 11. 03 조회 10165

2020-11-03

작성자: dhkim1 담당 튜터: Neal2
수강생 원문과 튜터 교정 (Before & After)
학생 제출 원문
This morning, I had a MRI scan on my spine and an endoscopy in my stomach.

Up to now, when I had an endoscopy, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopy.

All Americans have endoscopy in a dream-like state.

I enjoy freediving when it is at ebb tide/at low tide/at low water.
I don't do freediving when it is at full tide/at high tide/at high water.
튜터 교정 답변

This morning, I had a MRI scan on my spine and an endoscopy in my stomach.

Up to now, when I had an endoscopy, I didn't take a sedative. I was always awake during endoscopy.

All Americans have endoscopy in a dream-like state.

I enjoy freediving when it is at ebb tide/at low tide/at low water.
I don't do freediving when it is at full tide/at high tide/at high water.  *****

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